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Time Flow

Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:01 pm
by lazysunside
Title: Undecided
One day, Kyon go to school and discover Haruhi and everyone in the SOS club disappear. Could it be another disappearance of Suzumiya Haruhi? or just another job done by Nagato? Strange things is Kyon keep dreaming about dreams of Haruhi asking if he already know something and this happened just because Kyon wanted it to be.
PS:By the way ingore the attrachment. Its something i draw several month ago...unexperiencely. The drawing right now will be somewat better as i struggles on drawing things perfectly.
Wait till i come back

Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 7:20 pm
by Pixel
The Nagato Costume v.0 is...strange looking. In a bad way.

Other than that, pretty good. Especially the actually pages themselves. They're great. You seem like the person who's better at drawing actual panels/pages than drawing sketches or character art.

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:02 pm
by lazysunside
And a little more idea a bonus character.... our beloved admin Shamisen will be in the manga too His sketch will be release soon ^^

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:12 pm
by Taiga
Heh... I think It's high time I uploaded some of my drawings for this. I'll just go do some now.
Any chance somebody can tell me what 'reasoning' is in Japanese, could they?

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:14 pm
by lazysunside
yay time to see the artistic of Pandies

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:17 pm
by Taiga
*Pan

Seriously, how hard can it be?
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I'll do a few character and pose sketches for you.

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:19 pm
by lazysunside
Well i just started all over again after almost 2 and half year ^^ anyway i'm a beginner

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:41 pm
by Taiga
Whatever the case; go read my post in your art thread.

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 4:11 pm
by Nagato
Pandemonium wrote: Any chance somebody can tell me what 'reasoning' is in Japanese, could they?
I don't remember offhand...
*Goes to look it up*
Bleh... there seem to be a couple depending on the nuance you're going for. Go look it up yourself :P

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 4:13 pm
by Taiga
;-; Damn... I'm looking for it as my story will most likely be called 'The Reasoning Of Haruhi Suzumiya'

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:09 pm
by lazysunside
Wanna pm me and give me your hint?

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:10 pm
by Taiga
hint? There's no hint. It's all written in posts.

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:13 pm
by lazysunside
nah hint how to draw better

Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:47 pm
by Nagato
lazysunside wrote:nah hint how to draw better
... Uh oh.
*Crawls into shelter* o_o

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 12:20 pm
by lazysunside
hehe i'm practicing around 4 hours a day lol how come i cannot draw hands and feet

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 1:25 pm
by Taiga
Because you're not trying hard enough, i guess. Go read some tutorials and draw from life.

Nagato: I'm not even going to try v.v

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:41 pm
by lazysunside
Well i did but one more thing about my mind. I'm impatient.. how to kill it? i dun really know when i'm impatient or not i just know that i need to draw until my hand become familiar with it then i'll create my own style

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:53 pm
by Taiga
Go learn from books/forums who deal in GOOD critique.

You also need to learn that it's not necissary to defend every little thing... just improve it ibstead.

Don't: But I'm a n00b at that, it's not my fault I can't do it!

Do: Ok, I'll go get more practice!

While you're not nearly as bad as some people I've met... it's something I see in the way you write.

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:57 pm
by lazysunside
true that every artist is amature at first but to think that because he is a noob and he can't do it? its a big mistake i agree with u. How can u draw something u never draw before eh? even if u have no talent but life give human the ability to learn u know ^^

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:11 pm
by Taiga
So go do it.

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:15 pm
by lazysunside
I start it since this monday already lol i just didn't type the story yet but i'll give u the summary if u dun mind about spoiler.Wat your call sir?

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:18 pm
by Taiga
I say the same as I did before: Go write it up (not necissarily the story... just a MEGA plan... and maybe the first chapter as a written piece) and take up to a creative writing forum- not here.

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:27 pm
by lazysunside
so u wanna see my summary

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:45 pm
by Taiga
quite frankly... no.

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 6:36 pm
by Pixel
That was pretty frank.

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 6:49 pm
by Nagato
*Makes popcorn*
Want some, Pixel? :)

I'm actually not bad at drawing, myself, but I lack the patience for it for some reason so I simply don't do it at all rather than forcing myself to take the time or doing sloppy, quick jobs. One thing I never did was to try to impress people with quick jobs and then toss out excuses when they aren't impressed.

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 2:45 am
by Taiga
I've visited so many different art boards... but they all seem infested with people looking for an ego boost and no actual critique. I've been on Sweatdrop Studios and NeoMag forums... but neither were impressive. There are too many people unwilling to take critique; and it lowers the attitude of the board on the whole. It's kind of dumb, really.

As for the popcorn... can i have some? Though as to whether there'll be much of a show, i'm skeptical. I've kinda given up.

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 11:56 am
by lazysunside
Never give up we, artist never become a real one if we give up. I'm counting on u, Kira!!!
Oh and i just discover 1 thing tips from the pros mangaka from Tokyo manga university: there are three kind of drawing style in manga.
1.Realistic manga.Example: House of mice or slamdunk
2. fine sketch manga example: Clamp or Shinanyo shin, Bleach or sumthing like that
3.Simplify manga Example: MoSH, Clannad or naruto....
Interesting huh? i think i'm going to do the simplified first since Haruhi anime is simplified

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 2:53 pm
by Taiga
I didn't say i was giving up on anything but you.

Don't try and classify your style until it's in it's final form... it's like taking a 4 year old's art and trying to decide if it's manga or cubism.

Re: Time Flow

Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 4:41 pm
by lazysunside
So...my art....my..art....IS ONE OF THE FOUR YEARS OLD ART......AAHHHHH*run away and crying*