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Re: Time Flow

Post by Nagato » Thu Jan 17, 2008 7:23 pm

lazysunside wrote:So...my art....my..art....IS ONE OF THE FOUR YEARS OLD ART......AAHHHHH*run away and crying*

... I suggest reading people's posts at least three times before hitting the 'reply' button.
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Re: Time Flow

Post by Pixel » Thu Jan 17, 2008 7:37 pm

I second that suggestion.

I also agree with Jasper's advice. Right now, I'm also trying to find my own art style. At first, I wanted to do what you're doing and try to classify it into a certain, set kind. However, I learned it is better to just make your own style. To do that, keep practicing until you find a style which is both easy for you AND looks good. Once you've mastered that, you can tell what type of style it is.

And they usually don't fit cleanly into a certain set. Someone's style could be both realistic and sketchy, or some other combination. Just draw what you're comfortable with, push yourself to do it better, so then you'll find out what your unique style is.
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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:48 pm

i was j/k nobody in here know how to take a joke?
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Re: Time Flow

Post by otakugospel » Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:51 pm

lazysunside wrote:So...my art....my..art....IS ONE OF THE FOUR YEARS OLD ART......AAHHHHH*run away and crying*


(disclaimer:I've been inactive a bit so i just lurked around a while to figure out what's going on..)

I'm not sure how serious you are,but that is not the way to handle criticism..(even when misinterpreted)
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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:06 pm

Yohoo! Update again
Teaser coming up(page 1) enjoy guys ^^
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Re: Time Flow

Post by Nagato » Thu Jan 17, 2008 11:53 pm

lazysunside wrote:i was j/k nobody in here know how to take a joke?

In case you're new to these here intarwebz, sarcasm/jokes do not necessarily inflect properly through text, so understand when people take you seriously by mistake.
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Re: Time Flow

Post by Taiga » Fri Jan 18, 2008 7:19 am

If you're using page 1 as a teaser, like I am... I suggest making sure it's entirely self-contained... no mid-speech deaths. It also needs to make you want... no... need to know what's going to come next.

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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Fri Jan 18, 2008 2:00 pm

BOOM!!! Pretend like nothing happened here
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Re: Time Flow

Post by Joel » Sat Jan 19, 2008 9:46 am

He meant that the teaser shouldn't be half way through something when it ends. So its like a really short story sort of thing. I suppose you could make it a sort of cliff hanger though. "To be continued..." and all that.

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Re: Time Flow

Post by Taiga » Sun Jan 20, 2008 1:39 pm

It's not a teaser if it's not REALLY vague, but gripping.

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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Tue Jan 22, 2008 11:54 am

Oh well forget about the teaser thingy. So how much page do u think i must draw atleast for chapter 1 like 20-30?

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Re: Time Flow

Post by Taiga » Tue Jan 22, 2008 12:24 pm

Negima! has *counts* 71 pages for chapter 1 and 27 for chapter 2...

It's not page count that dictates the chapter; it's the position in the story.

I suggest you write down every part of your story and split it into sections; I'll make up a few fake ideas.

1-
We meet the group and they have their first brigade meeting of the new year. Haruhi has already ordered a city-sweep search for mysteries.

2-
Yuki and Kyon are paired up to search the city. When they reach the library, Yuki immediately heads to the sci-fi area where They meet Tsuruya-san reading a book about nanotechnology. After bidding farewell they return to meet Haruhi.

It could be like that... or all one chapter; It depends on what is important. I suggest going over the events of each chapter in the closest novel to you.

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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Tue Jan 22, 2008 3:44 pm

thank you ure a great help i'm going to start it may be about next week or more. Need to learn how to draw background
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Re: Time Flow

Post by Taiga » Tue Jan 22, 2008 4:03 pm

Yeah... backgrounds are hard. But at least you can use the same ones over and over... just draw them big. Draw huge rooms and take small areas for different frames.
How will you make your characters stand out against the background?

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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Tue Jan 22, 2008 4:32 pm

Well being alone for too long make me have a big mind and my papa is an artist so he say he will help me. But to have understand how to draw the thing then i know a little bit of it but to draw stuff like bird and the people going around then i'm dead^^
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Re: Time Flow

Post by Taiga » Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:43 am

I bought a lot of animal drawing books recently... so i can get practice as i need to draw them.

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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:47 am

time for me to buy a animal book too but too bad i have to go in special event only

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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Fri Jan 25, 2008 1:16 pm

Man i got the background basic. Its very easy to draw if you know how to draw it. Its just like when u wanna draw a human body and stuff
Update the manga will be draw in after the plot for chapter 1 is done. The process(drawing) will start this weekend, Sunday
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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:13 pm

Should i do 100% manga with tone and special effects?
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Re: Time Flow

Post by Taiga » Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:14 pm

I suggest not. Adding tone can make something look terrible if it's not near perfect already.

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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Mon Jan 28, 2008 12:31 pm

guess i'll do the hair only and some battle screen^^
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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Tue Jan 29, 2008 8:48 pm

Ok the project is going to be delay since the artist is practicing Hare Hare Yukai
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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Thu Jan 31, 2008 3:19 pm

Chapter 1 is going to be released around mid or late February. Chapter 1 is long^^
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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Thu Feb 07, 2008 7:35 pm

OK Here is a big update. There are Bad news and good news.
The Good news is i'm working hard on drawing manga.
The bad news is this manga is gonna be delay fr a very long time due to extreme art pratice and reform forthe artist.
Now for a more understandable answer for the fate of this manga...See u next 2???. Thank you for reading
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Re: Time Flow

Post by Taiga » Fri Feb 08, 2008 5:30 am

The 'understandable' answer was unintelligible.

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Re: Time Flow

Post by Joel » Fri Feb 08, 2008 12:17 pm

I think he was trying to call us names subtly... With his C U Next Two thing... Anyway, yeah. More understandable next time please!

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Re: Time Flow

Post by Taiga » Fri Feb 08, 2008 1:48 pm

I don't think he was name calling.

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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Fri Feb 08, 2008 1:50 pm

By the way, your msn plus gave me lots of pop up
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Re: Time Flow

Post by Taiga » Fri Feb 08, 2008 2:06 pm

it's supposed to... that's confuguration o.o

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Re: Time Flow

Post by lazysunside » Fri Feb 08, 2008 2:19 pm

is there any way to deactivate it?
or i have to play battlefield 2 with it lol
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